This poem is a bad idea –
a reflection of words that stumble
out of my mouth as I talk to you
but nerves outweigh my ability
to speak coherently.
It’s nothing more than an afterthought
coming in to save your day from me.
Am I mumbling inconsistently,
or forcing words into sentences?
Wait, can you hear my truth?
This written mess is my gift to you,
picked up from a pile of jumbled thoughts
and placed together with no effort.
Do you like how I color my words?
Unrhymed, like a barren desert.
Love, Alyazya
ALYAZYA 
🙃
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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I have been following you for a long time now , and I still find it hard to believe how you can phrase such simple words into a deep poetry
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Thank you for following me. I’m so happy to hear that you’re enjoying it!
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Reblogged this on Notes and commented:
“Unrhymed, like a barren desert.”
This random beauty in the words and the art is something that not every eye can see and feel deep enough.
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Thanks, Amir 💙
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You’re warmly welcome Yazze 🌹💕
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Well done!
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Thank you!
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This is how I feel about at least a few of my most recent works. If that’s the appropriate term for them. I really enjoyed this 🙂
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Same! I usually feel that way!
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Oh my … Loved it 💕💕💕
This is the kind of poetry i want to read more often 👍
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Thank you for the humbling comment! I hope you stick around. 💕
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Wonderful, and this line resonates strongly – “It’s nothing more than an afterthought / coming in to save your day from me.”
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I’m so happy you read it!
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I loved it a lot. I need good writing in my life:)
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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Great poet
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You are probably one of my favorite writers on the website. You understand the point of poetry. Not many people do.
I love your literary criticism.
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Thank you! Your comment made my day! I hope you enjoy the rest of my writing.
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Always do. 🙂
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Interesting in the thoughts of existentialism.
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I wish I could have ‘bad ideas’ for poems like this one. Great writing 😀
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