
If I die at sea,
don’t rush to bury me.
Dip my words in ink.
Let the pain sink in.
Pray, God welcomes me.
If I die at sea,
I reached divinity.
Let my thoughts drown you.
Trace them on the shore.
Lay them by my corpse.
Look within you, and you will see,
I gave my life to set you free.
Close your eyes, you’ll find the key;
the universe lies within you.
Oh, ’cause if you’ve seen it, honey,
it was a beastly crime.
Hold on.
Hold your breath.
Paint the sky in my red.
It’ll find its way.
It’ll cover the waves,
and soak the sand beneath.
Now, give up.
Give way…
for my soul to be free.
Love, Alyazya
Poetry by the spirits. I hope i too can write such vivid imaginations
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I was already sold at “if I die at sea”…..one of the most beautiful poems, I’ve read….keep writing from your heart
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This is really beautiful! I’m glad that you are expressing the pure essence of who you are. It is making the world such an amazing place!
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Beautiful! (like an ocean) ๐ค
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“Paint the sky in my red.”
wow. ๐ณ
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Beautiful x
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It feels so pure and beautiful….May God bless you…
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Beautiful sentiments and expression .
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Lovely poetry
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Thank you ๐
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This is so raw and captivating, great work
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem, powerful imagery!
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wonderful imagination!
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I love the way the structure changes, drifting with the clearly present emotion. Its ebbs and flows offer as much as any full length novel.
Thank you for sharing.
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Glad you like it!
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Naicee
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๐ฎWow. I love this!!
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Love this! Wow! You have a good writing voice. I’m back from an absence and hope you check in from time to time. I have lots of new writing tactics to share. ๐
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The idea of being in the sea to drown ..Love that made me picture u as a word of art sunk into the sea and let all color loose and with each color having their own meaning ๐๐ผ
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Very deep and powerful. I really like how you express yourself in every poem.
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Thanks! ๐๐๐
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Beautiful! I love that…
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โIf I die at sea,
donโt rush to bury me.
If I die at sea,
I reached divinity.โ
Love these lines, and love this poem. Such beautiful imagery, I found it captivating.
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Iโm happy you like it! ๐
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Wow. This poem really resonated with me. I was taken in by the first line!
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