Things don’t matter, they hurt nevertheless
Hearts do shatter but I still try my best
‘Cause when the night comes in,
I start to live within
where the dark is hidden
and the truth remains
still …
Diving in water, looking to care less
My heart’s growing broader
but my life still is a mess
‘Cause when the sun’s risen
and love becomes a given,
it comes in to greet me
but my echoes are delayed
still …
‘Cause it’s a song that sings itself
and I may not make any sense,
but when the night comes in
and the light holds me
I call out from within
a name I want to know me
Love, Alyazya
ALYAZYA 
This inspires me
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Interesting.
Good job.
Are you practicing writing lines that rhyme or just what comes to your mind at some moment when you’re inspired/moved to write?
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I write it how I think it, which is the same way I wrote my older posts but I stopped combining them into paragraphs.
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Cool. I like the way you think, it sounds poetic, almost rhymes, or like a song, from your heart or mind.
Thank you for sharing what you think and write.
Do you think it’ll be easier for you to write without combining your words into paragraphs? Or will you write things in a way you think it should be based on how you’re feeling or what you’re thinking as you write? Or you’ll just try different ways on different days? Or you don’t know yet and you and we’ll just have to wait and see how it goes? Hope that’s not too many questions for you.
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Thanks, reading stuff like this helps me
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I’m glad to hear that!
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Excellent
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Lovely!
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Beautifully written. . .do you write this all at once in the moment, or do you sit for a while and really think about it and continuously redraft?
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I write it at once, but sometimes I let it go and re-visit it to edit
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Excellent thoughts. 🙂
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A very positive post. We need to try to find the good in life, which is what I told a friend of mine this morning, and not focus on the hard things. Even a smile can brighten our day. 🙂
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Thank you for your comment William
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You nailed it . Good one. Can we collab??
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Beautiful!
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It sounds like a lyric of soft song.
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