
You’re a picture I needed to draw my stories around back when my thoughts steered towards you.
Disapproval laments you but memories confined in a strained mind hold me back.
An image refuses to leave you behind: a gaze held, a jaw clenched. It killed me.
You asked me to breathe but my breaths overpowered me. I drowned.
You were centuries away. The speed of light couldn’t catch up to you.
You took notice of my senseless mumbling: a cascade of sounds merging with thin air.
Whispers encumbered by the weight of my feelings translate into words only for you to know.
I spoke and I spoke but I never came out. Yet, you discerned the truth in my lies.
But you were shallow water.
I understand now that I’ve always been blind. I’m always looking at people with curious eyes; trying to understand, trying to forge a feeling.
Everyone’s a blank face.
Love, Alyazya
This is great! Man…there’s some serious weight to it. It hints at so much. Beautiful!
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Thank you 💙 I’m so happy you like it
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Killer final lines!
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Thank you, Michael 💙
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“Everyone’s a blank face” – love this. So true.
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I’m glad you do. I feel like as times passes, more faces are turning blank.
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also – who really sees us for who we are – we are the projections of others – or am I reading too much into it, lol?
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We always look for similarities in others. Our perceptions are blinded. We never truly see anyone. 😦
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Totally love it!
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I’m glad you did *^^*
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🙂
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“I’m always looking at people with curious eyes; trying to understand, trying to forge a feeling.” Loved that line, it’s so relatable, the entire thing is really. I feel like I try to make a connection with, like, 50% of people I meet lol.
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I’m so happy you can relate to this!
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Love it
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Deep and dramatic, like it – “But you were shallow water.” Owch! 🙂
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Hahaha :3
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