
I’ll plant you a garden of roses when the wind is as kind as it is today, and the air is as cold as my skin.
Loud and clear, I hear the air yelling at me, waiting for my blood to boil, but the fire within me died out long ago. There’s nothing left but the cold touch of my fingers waiting for winter to come.
I’ll plant you a garden of roses when the weather is too cold to survive. A red rose standing still in a tundra because the heat between our skin is enough to keep it warm.
I feel it rushing to my ends. I’m the cold bottom of the ocean and you’re the hot wave that keeps returning to me. When your waves come back home, I send my waters to your shore. That’s what it feels like when your skin touches mine.
I’ll plant you a garden of roses within a garden whose limits are set by the vines we’ve grown, behind the walls of a castle built within the walls of our room.
A house so small but it carries our most treasured memories. The wooden floors creak when we dance over them. The living room is small enough to hold us in its arms.
That’s where we danced the first night…
that’s where you sat to work…
that’s the wall I spoke to in my dreams.
Love, Alyazya
This is so beautiful and melancholy.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it 💛
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Seriously now, is the person you dedicated this too reading this at all, because if something like this was written for me, I would come running. WOW. 😀 Splendid work Sergeant Yazzeus.
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Hahaha, I’m happy to hear that ^^
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A very powerful piece! Well Done 😃💛
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Thanks, I appreciate your comment 💛
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This is very nice imagery for us right now in the cold northeast U.S.Feels good. Cheers:-)
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Ahhh I’m glad you enjoyed it! 💛💛💛 I wish it got as cold as it does there
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My kind of garden…
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💛💛💛
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That makes my heart flutter 💙
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You write beautifully – I enjoy your style, and this piece was no exception. X
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I’m happy you do 💛
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Wow just beautiful and so meaningful, Thx for chekcing out my blog by the way I hope you liked it! I have been trying to post more regularly and make it more personal so more people can connect and relate to the content without being ashamed or embaressed but instead show their true colours and opinions. If you have any feedback for me, please don’t hesiatate to tell me. I love your content by the way xxxx I could never write this well
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I like how relatable you are and how you still manage to show aspects of self-reflection and self-improvement. It reminds me of my 16-year-old self. Don’t stop sharing.
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OMG that’s so sweet and thoughful. Thx I won’t. My blog really helps me as well to get things off my chest and relate to others xxx
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master piece.I loved it.
ravi
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You’re always so kind with your words 😭💙
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Planting a garden takes time–so wind has to be kind many times. I loved reading this as you melt your soul in your words.
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I’m glad you did 💛
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Too be loved like this, seems more of something dream and dwell on; preserve immortality.
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💚💚💚
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Very powerful 💟
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Touching. Beautiful.
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Thank you💚
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Poetic writing. Love the imagery.
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I’m glad you did, Jenny 💙
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Love this thanks for the inspiration!
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I’m so happy you did!
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This is beautiful
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Thank you 💞💞💞
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This is splendid!…good work!
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Thanks 😊
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Lovely, and all the words were delicately woven 💖
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💕
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A very unique piece. Loved it keep them coming
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Will do 😊
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Reblogged this on ChaChill.
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I aspire to write similar to you. Such beauty. Such depth. Thank you for sharing.
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Omg! That means so much to me 😱
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Beautiful😊
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Thank you 😊😊😊
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😊❤
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Great👌👌
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Very well written.
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Thank you!
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I really dig that fifth stanza/line/what-have-you. Rhythm like a river.
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Thank you!
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Lovely poem, written so that I could feel some familiarity, but knew damn sure it was not mine, but yours. Your voice has a very strong delicacy. Thank you.
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I’m glad you enjoyed *(^.^)*
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Your imagery is amazing
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Thank you, grace
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Wow!
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Like the imagery in your poetry!
The image in your Image is not of Roses, however! 😉
But i guess you already knew that?.
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” I’m the cold bottom of the ocean and you’re the hot wave that keeps returning to me. ”
Absolutely wonderful.
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Thank you 💙💙💙
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Fantastic imagery and powerful words. You’re doing amazing at this. Keep it up! ❤
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