Under the rain, I am restrained, with nowhere to face except for all the things coming my way.

Water once cold and warm, formed marshes in my deserted home.
In a funny world, I was evergreen, until the rain moated my soul.
And I, as Tiresias, have foresuffered all, under water touched by a trojan whore.
Inextricably entwined with the pressure of living. Of this formerly me, I am a patron.
Free to protect me, as you go to where you’d live ruefully.
My reflection of you was gone by day. You’re no longer the things you meant to me, the colors I see or the words I please but you’re chained to my neck, like steps taken on wet cement.
The reason you came is the reason I want you to stay.
The reason you’re here is the reason I need you to leave.
Love, Alyazya
I love your last two lines 😃💛
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Me too!
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I’m glad you did 💙I hope you find something to relate to in my writing
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Lovely💖
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Thank you!
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Skillful.
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Loved this.
ravi
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Beautiful. Love the tone
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💜 this is sad and beautiful.
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Sadness doesn’t always have to be ugly 💞
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Beautifully written. Happy New Year! 🎉❤️
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Happy New Year girl
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💞💞💞
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This is really relatable ❤
Happy new year 🙂
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I’m so happy you were able to relate to it! 💞
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Wow!! Beautiful! Loved it 😍
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“I was evergreen, until the rain moated my soul” I love that word choice so much!
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I’m so happy you did! I was actually unsure of that line
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Wow. I think I need to read this three more times. I was overwhelmed a bit! When you said moated my soul (among other things). Excellent!
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Really likes me so much.
You have a new follower 🙂
Warm hugs for you.
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Thank you!
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Hey Gin! I’m so happy to read this. I hope I don’t disappoint you and feel free to give me whatever feedback you want to! 😊💞
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I think you’re talented, you know, write sometimes people thinks is to force the mind to write something cute to empathize with others, but it’s more than that, a really write is a reflect of emotions transmitted from a pen with ink of the soul. And you can do that, keep doing it, cuz some of this comments like this one I’m making to you, made me reach a dream that I never dreamt.
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Gin! You’re so sweet 💙 I’m so happy to have you as a follower! It’s great to hear you achieved a dream you never thought of being able to reach. It really warms my heart and I hope that I get to say that to someone one day 😊 It warms my heart that you find a soul in my writing. I hope that continues to be the case. It’s really difficult to write when you don’t feel the words coming out of you.
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The last words hits hard but really to me seems like you haven’t made up your mind. Really nice word thumbs up for that
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Thank you
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you welcome
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You had me with three words, and they weren’t “I love you”.
“Under the rain”, and I fell.
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💛
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I re-read this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for your sweet comment and I hope you’re having a great day 😊
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I wish I could see positive.
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Beautifully written thoughts, Alyazya!
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Thanks Justin 😊
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Very warm, pleasant writing!
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Thank you! I’m glad you think so, most people find it melancholic 😊
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It’s great stuff!
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Reblogged this on ChaChill.
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omg the last two lines got my eyes sweating :((( anyway can i just put that in my twt bio? kidding. but i am truly moved. 😩
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I’m glad you loved it 💖💖💖
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Well done again. Even I love the last two lines.
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I’m happy you did!
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Beautiful 👌
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