Can pain come from a place other than what I believe is a mistake?
He gave into an obedience derived from his fear.
He mustn’t be aware. We mustn’t speak. Words haven’t been said.
But the free crowned a king — the rebellion is lost. He’ll regret ever living again.
You think the breaths you take are heaven-sent but how much do you lose just trying to live? No wonder the people haven’t spoken to you yet. Little monster with no place to hide, where in this heart do you reside? I hope you survive this deadly ride ’cause living through the pain is a life-sent gift. You’ll never be more alive than when you want to die.
Love, Alyazya
A very deep piece of writing Alyazya!
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Thank you so much sweety!
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wow.
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Well written ❤
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Deep writing indeed… I love how you play with your words but still manage to convey dark shades.
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Thank you 😊
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a quirky dark piece of writing with a great last line
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Excellent piece. Thank you
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Thank you!
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Wow! I loved it; especially: “You;; never be more alive when you want to die.”
Fantastic & twisted!!
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Thank you
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well done. yr new name. panharmonic. you earned it.
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Very nice work my friend!
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Thank you!
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Wonderfully written!
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Thank you!
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you up for collaborating, yazz? in the end, im actually making a movie. i started with my sketches, but a friend and I have done some interviews and i’ve taken some other footage and pics, for pre-producition. would u be interested in sharing some of ur own? up to u yazz. you can provide some of yr own bio, or writing, etcc…
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Hey Michael,
I believe you asked me for this before. I can’t make a decision based on this alone. You follow me on Instagram so please talk to me there. I’d like to know the details of this.
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Nice piece
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Thank you!
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Thank you for reading my posts and leaving so much feedback for me! It means a lot.
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Wow, hooked by the titled. A short delight like a hershey kiss. Excellent.
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Thank you! 😊 I’m glad you like it
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You write beautifully. Love 🙏
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